Disclaimer: I'm not an expert in English grammar, and I don't like English grammar, but I get OCD about it.
Most of the corrections that I want to make are just unnecessary commas which I marked in red circles.
Comma grammar in Moscow DLC
Comma grammar in Moscow DLC
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Re: Comma grammar in Moscow DLC
More pictures.
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Re: Comma grammar in Moscow DLC
Just a little more pictures.
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