Comma grammar in Moscow DLC

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Comma grammar in Moscow DLC

Unread postby Mitsune » Sat Sep 11, 2021 6:00 pm

Disclaimer: I'm not an expert in English grammar, and I don't like English grammar, but I get OCD about it.

Most of the corrections that I want to make are just unnecessary commas which I marked in red circles.
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Re: Comma grammar in Moscow DLC

Unread postby Mitsune » Sat Sep 11, 2021 6:00 pm

More pictures.
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Re: Comma grammar in Moscow DLC

Unread postby Mitsune » Sat Sep 11, 2021 6:01 pm

Just a little more pictures.
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